Thank you for this report and the effort you put in writting it. I enjoyed reading it as part of my preparation for an event
Allow me some critisism, if you might.
Writting things like:
"He thought he could fire the magmic thingy at will, but I played against him a couple months back, and checked its rules afterwards so I knew you needed a priest within 6” to activate it."
or
"Fyreslayers begin to attack back. Since I wasn’t too sure of the rules, I wasn’t aware that ONLY units who charged that turn OR had an enemy within 3” were eligible for combat, so technically his hearthguards weren’t allowed to attack again"
reveal some underlying bitterness towards your opponent and specifically his lack of understanding the rules (or worse his deliberate bending of the rules). This is something I read a lot in battle reports., even on some from very experience people.
Is it really necessary to put such commentary on a battle report? Does it add or detract from the overall writting?
Batrep: Deepkin vs. Fyreslayers
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Thank you for this report and the effort you put in writting it. I enjoyed reading it as part of my preparation for an event
Allow me some critisism, if you might.
Writting things like:
"He thought he could fire the magmic thingy at will, but I played against him a couple months back, and checked its rules afterwards so I knew you needed a priest within 6” to activate it."
or
"Fyreslayers begin to attack back. Since I wasn’t too sure of the rules, I wasn’t aware that ONLY units who charged that turn OR had an enemy within 3” were eligible for combat, so technically his hearthguards weren’t allowed to attack again"
reveal some underlying bitterness towards your opponent and specifically his lack of understanding the rules (or worse his deliberate bending of the rules). This is something I read a lot in battle reports., even on some from very experience people.
Is it really necessary to put such commentary on a battle report? Does it add or detract from the overall writting?